2019年天津市河西区英语二模书面表达浅析

2019-06-03 10:43

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　　各区二模刚刚过去，此次二模贴近高考，难度有梯度，出题回归传统，尤其河西、南开、和平三区，质量还是非常高的。
　　
　　今天主要讲一下河西二模中的书面表达，如图所示：

　　这篇书面表达是非常传统而规矩的一个发言稿，也就是自荐信的一种变体。但这篇发言稿又不同于传统的竞选稿，其中又加入了介绍于告知的内容，所以又有所变化，非常值得同学们注意。
　　
　　推荐同学们用一下模式进行写作：
　　
　　1.自我介绍：I’m Li Jin , a student of Chenguang Middle School.
　　
　　2.写信背景：I learnt that the school would hold a lecture about English study.
　　
　　3.写信目的：Now, I’m here to share something about my study of English.
　　
　　4.自己的英语学习习惯：例如：Keeping listening and reading English every morning. Reciting English word all the time. 等等。
　　
　　5.对于学校教学的建议：
　　
　　To begin with, ...
　　
　　Moreover,...
　　
　　What's more,...
　　
　　Finally,...
　　
　　First and foremost,...
　　
　　Additonally,...
　　
　　Last but not least,...
　　
　　Firstly,...
　　
　　Secondly, ...
　　
　　Thirdly,...
　　
　　建议合理即可。
　　
　　6.结尾：
　　
　　Hopefully my experience and suggestions will be useful to your English study. If you seek to know more about English study or to communicate with me, you can drop me a line or send me an email.
　　
　　这样，一篇比较客观的作文就基本成型了，后期还需添加进去一些高级表达，以期把分数再次提高。
　　
　　在此列出一些常见的高级表达替换供同学们参考：
　　
　　1．occur 替换 think of
　　
　　Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →
　　
　　An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
　　
　　It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
　　
　　2．devote替换spend
　　
　　He spends all his spare time in reading. →
　　
　　He devotes all his spare time to reading.
　　
　　3．seek替换want / look for
　　
　　They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.
　　
　　4．average 替换ordinary
　　
　　I’m an average ( ordinary ) student.
　　
　　5．but替换very
　　
　　The film we saw last night was very interesting. →
　　
　　The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.
　　
　　The film we saw last night was anything but boring.
　　
　　6．seat 替换sit
　　
　　On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.
　　
　　7．suppose 替换should
　　
　　He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
　　
　　8．appreciate 替换thank
　　
　　Thank you very much for you help. →
　　
　　We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
　　
　　9．the case替换 true
　　
　　I don’t think it is the case ( true ).
　　
　　10．on替换as soon as
　　
　　As soon as he arrived, he began his research. →
　　
　　On his arrival, he began his research..
　　
　　11．due to替换because of
　　
　　He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.
　　
　　12．cover替换walk/read
　　
　　After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.
　　
　　13．contribute to替换 be helpful/useful
　　
　　Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →
　　
　　Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.
　　
　　14．round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby
　　
　　① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?
　　
　　② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).
　　
　　15．come to light替换discover
　　
　　The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →
　　
　　The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.
　　
　　16．have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself
　　
　　After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).
　　
　　17．come up with替换think of
　　
　　Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.
　　
　　18．set aside替换save
　　
　　Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
　　
　　19．be of + n. 替换adj.
　　
　　The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.
　　
　　20．refer to 替换talk about/of, mention
　　
　　The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.
　　
　　21．can not but / can not help but替换have to do
　　
　　I could not but (had to) go home.
　　
　　22．more often than not替换usually
　　
　　More often than not (Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.
　　
　　23．lest替换so that /in order that
　　
　　I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. →
　　
　　I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.
　　
　　24．be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替换want to do sth./wish for
　　
　　I want to see you very much. →
　　
　　I am long to see you.
　　
　　25．be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in
　　
　　He is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps.
　　
　　26．more than替换very
　　
　　① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September. →
　　
　　I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.
　　
　　② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
　　
　　27．perfect (ly) 替换good/ very well
　　
　　He speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).
　　
　　28．do sb a/the favor 替换help
　　
　　Would you please do me the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?
　　
　　29．the other day替换a few days ago
　　
　　The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.
　　
　　30．in the course of替换during
　　
　　In the course of (During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.
　　
　　总结：
　　
　　稳中有变，但万变不离其宗，同学们只要基础打牢，便可以灵活多变，稳健地作出相应调整。